Monday, July 9, 2007

Worst dream/nightmare or Greatest fear? (HW)

I forgot all of my nightmares and dreams but I do know my fear. My greatest fear is falling/getting hurt.

It all happened last thursday, when I biked back to my house I carried the chihuahua(just to see how capable I am good at cycling) to bring it back to my house. Since I am not yet a professional bike rider, I fell down to the street and got some bleeding on my left knee area. To understand it more, just read the "three-star blood stain" post.

So now everytime I bike I try to ba at least a bit more careful about my actions and desires of achieving what can hurt me. I also learned the importance of knee pads, elbow pads, and a helmet(though I never use them).

1 comment:

ygy said...

Ever tried BIG BIKES? Hehehe. Just kidding. Don't even think about it! :-P

Here are some more whatnots for you:
1. "It all happened last thursday, when I biked back to my house I carried the chihuahua(just to see how capable I am good at cycling) to bring it back to my house." -> Capitalize "Thursday." Chop up your sentence!
2. "So now everytime I bike I try to ba at least a bit more careful about my actions and desires of achieving what can hurt me." -> Change "what" to "things that can."
3. Learn to proofread! You have some typo errors!