The "buddy systems" were ok, I liked it. It made me realize that I have not yet talked to at least some people even when I see them. It has opened my eyes to a better "point of view" in people.
My buddy circle was cooperative and fun to be with. Our fourth year "buddy" is a great leader, he lead everyone and tried to not be bad at it. Our third year "buddy" was helpful and kind, she cooperated with the whole group which means that she is open to anyone or everyone. My second year buddy is comfortable in his own way to his buddy circle because he kind of talks toeveryone in highschool but nonetheless he is still kind. Our first year "buddies" were willing to do the task that our leader would give to them.
I liked everything that has happened to me and my buddy circle. I had fun with them, laughed with them, and enjoyed each others presence.
To my buddy circle, thanks for everything. You may not know me as well as my class but you tried and even though you didnt bother and try to know me you still accepted me as a regular friend. I thank every person in my buddy circle.
What I didn't like about the week was that I lost my notebook, that is the reason why I lack in HW submissions. I forgot where I left it or where I lost it. Aaahhh! I am sorry to the teachers whom I have not yet submitted my HW.
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Sorry, this is going to be quite lengthy. :-D
1. "The "buddy systems" were ok, I liked it." -> You can still divide this sentence into two parts. By the way, use either "OK" in uppercase letters, or type it as "okay."
2. "It made me realize that I have not yet talked to at least some people even when I see them." -> At least how many people? You didn't specify. You merely said "some."
3. "Our fourth year "buddy" is a great leader, he lead everyone and tried to not be bad at it." -> Again, this sentence is a run-on. Chop it! Don't squeeze too many ideas into a single sentence! Moreover, your verb "lead" does not agree with your subject "he." (It should either be "led" or "leads.")
4. "My second year buddy is comfortable in his own way to his buddy circle because he kind of talks to everyone in highschool but nonetheless he is still kind." -> Too stringy. Never use "but" with "nonetheless." It becomes redundant.
5. "You may not know me as well as my class but you tried and even though you didnt bother and try to know me you still accepted me as a regular friend." -> Remember to use punctuation (apostrophes and commas) next time. Chop it up as well!
6. "What I didn't like about the week was that I lost my notebook, that is the reason why I lack in HW submissions." -> It's run-on once more! Waaaaah!
7. "I am sorry to the teachers whom I have not yet submitted my HW." -> You can still rephrase this sentence. It's quite confusing. :-D
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